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I want to cry with clouds
smile with rainbows
and fall with gray pigeons

there is a limit of flesh
a limit of being
a limit of thought
I have discovered the limit inside I

I want to cry with clouds
smile with rainbows
and fall with gray pigeons

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by Paradox

I absolutely love this line "and fall with gray pigeons" because there used to be some pigeons that perched outside my old highschool. They would tuck themselves into the corners of the windowsill, and occasionally they would divebomb towards the sidewalk...falling.

I suppose there really is a limit inside each one of us tied in with values, morals and other such things.

( Posted by: Concept [Member] On: September 28, 2004 )

I had a good read. Got the impression that it was about wanting to be in "everything", but at the same time being limited by being me. Something I`ve experienced from time to time. Anyway that was my associations.

( Posted by: Ingi [Member] On: September 28, 2004 )

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