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Written while watching Bill Clintons Address to
the Nation,wishing I could have shared the moment with that ever elusive mate.

The president said,
"My Fellow Americans..."
Naked,we snickered.

Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.

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The following comments are for "Spangled!"
by metrozol

Hiya Pen,thanks for stopping by and commenting.
Remember Bill Clinton? Monica Lewinsky? The scandal? The fornicatory indiscretions? Imagine
you're lying in bed,au naturel,watching t.v.with that special someone and the then-president,after
all the hoopla,comes on (pun intended) and says
"My fellow Americans". No classic fable. No intellectual exercise involving Darwins Theory of evolution. Just funny. Ha-ha. Well anyway,I'm glad
you enjoyed it.

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: October 20, 2004 )

Again Lius,
This is funny...Love that you explain things in your comments.......

Wish Claire would do an "Exposed" on you!!

Dar ;)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: November 22, 2004 )

Hello pretty lady.Glad you could drop in.I love it
when you ooze your sensuality all over my little words."EXPOSED"? OMIGOD!!!I know what that is!(You
mean besides my usual late night subway exhibitions?).Thanks for your generous vote of confidence but I'm far too new to this website to
warrant being interviewed and way too scared to offer anything new or useful.Besides,there are far
too many other experienced,prolific,professional
writers much more qualified to offer their valuable insight and wisdom. Look at that,it hasn't even happened and I'm already quaking in my
Garanimals! The Horror! THE HORROR!!! Well,gotta go. BYE!

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: November 22, 2004 )

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