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In honor of the closing of the show "CATS".

Rats on the railroad
In the shadows,on the street
Upstaging Broadway.

Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.

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The following comments are for "Mermans Vermin"
by metrozol

Metrozol, CATS...MM
I am very intrigued with your writing, it is good to see a new posting and I like this one lots.

( Posted by: dareva [Member] On: September 27, 2004 )

Oh what a puurrrfect closing to Cats!!! You have pickled me tink with this one, metrozol. LOL!! This has to be one of the best haikus I have ever read. It's so memorable; like trying to unring a bell to forget it....ya know?


( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 27, 2004 )

you tink so?
Wow! Thanks for all of your input,ladies.Claire,so
happy you enjoyed it.Dareva,I'm blushing!You
inspire me to continue.Char & Dar,I only wish you could have seen the images going through my mind when the news broke out-dark forces came out to play that day! moo hoo Hoo HA HA! I love this site
so much,thanks to you all.

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: September 28, 2004 )

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