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every morning
she dress the Persephone's
green skin

beyond her matted crystalline lens
there was living
transparent young ladies
with transparent lips
and transparent wings
growing from their shoulders
there was living
green knights
with green souls
and green wings
growing on their heels

her green skin was blooming
she will bear fruits some day
you should know that



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The following comments are for "Persephone's skin"
by inmost

greek goddess
She is my favorite and this is a lovely tribute.
Green is my favorite color also, this captured my interest.

Nice imagery!

( Posted by: jade [Member] On: September 26, 2004 )

jade
Jade, thanks for your comment. I think that every woman have her "Persephone's skin" so my lines are not only a tribute to the greek goddess but a tribute to every woman and to their strange world.

( Posted by: inmost [Member] On: September 26, 2004 )





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