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See me
feel me
hold me
near.

Kiss me
taste me
love me
dear.

Thrill me
tease me
have no
fear.

Want me
need me
always
sincere.



------
I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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The following comments are for "Sincere"
by Char

Char, exquisite
The only thing more I could add is that you can never write enough poetry...this is wonderful.

always,
Dar ;-)

( Posted by: dareva [Member] On: September 27, 2004 )

Aawww
Thank you so very much, Penelope, Claire, and Dar. All of these wonderful comments have made my day. I DO appreciate it.

Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 27, 2004 )

"Music in my soul"
Char, I must first start by thanking you for your prolific comments on my works.I must confess the cause why I donnot comment on people's works,the reason was that in this part of the world,we buy minutes for checking anything on the internet.

However,your work,SINCERE,is truely sincere.It ran into my blood till date like a therapy.God bless us.You are great.
Princeo
globalactingpoets@yahoo.com

( Posted by: princeo [Member] On: October 9, 2004 )





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