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O, I retrospect
An ancestoral trade
The trade I was told
A long long time trade
Of no hussling and no immense struggling
The trade of the wise
The trade of honesty and piety
An afrrican type of trade
Where no man measured in contrast
But that paper they call oof
Brought ego, hardship and perfidy
Because of egoism desire
It bright doom!


Henry O. Lawrence

Copyright 2004 Henry O. Lawrence

Due to the love I have for my younger brother, I wrote this poem with his Name.It was 1st published in www.poetry.com
Cheers
Prince odimegwu Onwumere


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God bless all writers for they are the image of God.

When you insult a writer, you'er not doing the best for him.But when you correct him, you're a good friend.
Cheers !

Odimegwu Onwumere


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