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At the exhibit
She had a strange sensation
That something gooey
Merged her skirt to her skin
Enlightenment
Is a chocolate mint wafer
Still warm from her belly
That she mushed into my palm
"I gotta go wash this off.Bye."
Ahhh yes,but...
The pleasure is all mine.


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Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.


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by metrozol

Yummy
This was very cute, reminded me of something one of my kids would have done. You made me smile, thank you!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 24, 2004 )

lick,slurp,smack!
Nae,anytime I can remind someone of a child is an
indescribable blessing to me,and if I can inspire
a smile,then I know my life has meaning!Windchime,
if I ever thought there was that much meaning in
this piece,I would've never indulged in recreat-
ional drug use,oh so long ago.Your insight into YUMMY blows my mind.Yes,it was an art exhibit and Satori has never been more delicious!Claire,making
you grin makes me happy.Thank you all.

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: September 28, 2004 )





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