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Tonight I choose silence
And rest the white rose
on my synthesizer
'One fine evening',I muse
Then lay my head to race.

Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.

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by metrozol

Surprised I am the only one to comment. This is quite short, but enough said that I do understand it and relish the idea of wanting to be in your place. I have read all 4 of your poems and I am intrigued that you do choose to write as you please. Not staying to one form. Good and well for you. I am looking forward to more reading of your writing, that I may get to know you better. I find you interesting. I really like your work.

Merci, for sharing this with us at Lit.


( Posted by: dareva [Member] On: September 26, 2004 )

Dareva,my white rose,it's just you and me against the world.Please forgive me for not responding to your reply soon enough.I'm so happy that your playfully intimate avatar takes its place as the crowning muse in this otherwise desolate little corner of my amorphous electronic cortex.Than Q,

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: November 21, 2004 )

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