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Flick the blowing on, dry concentrate

Sixty-nine floors of eighty-sixing drives tired

Nerve cops to kiss ceramic bluster-aid

Beefcake rubs wood

Ivory slick to conscious fingernails

Red and rosacea spring like elastic

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The following comments are for "Herd On | Hard Off"
by iov_pater

My Sixty Ninth Nerve
when ceramic comes to the aid of bluster...
I'm kissing the ivory bowl

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 30, 2016 )

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