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1.
She saw the old lighthouse
one rainy August day
and thought of her mother
and me,
with a pen and postcards in her hands
and calm in her heart...
God bless her
I love her
and that she thought of me that day
is enough
I can already breathe
the salt she breathed.

It doesn't matter much
how she loves me back
but that she loves me
as much as she did
her sojourn in Massachussetts.

2.
I cry tonight
because of the joy I feel
in my discovery of her
not too far away back
when she wrote the saddest leave-taking poem
I've ever known.

3.
My friend,
I will be saying good-bye for a while.
I hope to find you still
when I come back.


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*************************************
crystal face I kiss
tongue tastes like sweet cold rain
I fall into pond




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The following comments are for "A Blog For A Friend"
by PETERPAULINO

Peter!!!!
I just read that you are leaving, why!?! I hope it is nothing to awful, well, a huge hug for my friend across the continents. I hope everything is well, your writing and your support has been wonderful, and it was great that I was here to see you develop alot more confidence in your English and writing.

If you want to stay in touch adelbarre@hotmail.com.

Best Wishes on whatever journey you are about to embark on.

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: September 22, 2004 )

Just read this
So long Peter. We will miss you. Hurry back.

Best Wishes,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 24, 2004 )

nice touch Peter
Peter. You have shown how a true artist crosses boundaries of language without losing his unique voice. I salute you my friend and hope to see and hear you around here ASAP. You must come back to see how Elrok fairs, too you know. ;) Best of wishes peter. This was a nice way to say farewell for a while.
mick

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: September 24, 2004 )

You Can't Go!
Peter, what do you mean you're leaving?
I must have missed your post about it.

Were'nt you even going to say goodbye to your Ma?...unthinkable! What is this nonsense? How can I keep you out of trouble if I don't know where you are?
Call your Ma!!!

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: September 24, 2004 )

DONT GO!!!!
You have an incredible talent. I have been readingyour poetry and blogs and what not. Of all I have read, I must read more! If you are going some where take a laptop!

( Posted by: DrBlack [Member] On: November 27, 2004 )





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