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full moon eclipse and
a blooming morning glory -
look back or ahead?



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The following comments are for "haiku 7"
by inmost

Claire, Jessica
Claire...first I have to say that all my haiku it's about what I've seen and what was happening. I don't use to write haiku about something I just imagine. The "mechanism" is something like : I see - I feel - I'm looking for the meanings (in everything there are meanings, we are just blinds to see that) - I'm writing. In the night i was writing that haiku I was wondering if I should find solutions of some of my trouble in the experience (i.e. in the past) or in the plans I have. Something like this...:)

Jessica...the number means nothing special. I don't use to title my haiku (giving title to a haiku it's like you choose the road (your road) for your readers. I think it's is not the haiku spirit. However, I'm numbering my haiku because it's easier to recognize one or another when I'm receiving critiques on it (not so often and not so many:) )


( Posted by: inmost [Member] On: September 25, 2004 )





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