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Perhaps you could see past me, or through me,
because I don't want to see anymore, or be anymore. It seems so useless to say what I have to say but I'll say it anyway. This life has been a nightmare; I just want to wake up in heaven. God knows I deserve it. I've stood for something good, complet, whole. If I've been weak, I haven't been greedy. When I've been strong, I've been noble.

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