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Umpteen uncanny is the environment
We are living in the earth
Associated with problems
wheather you are a Christain,
muslem,Pagan,Nihilist, or Zenist
You must know that our best ideas
May be wrong;for life itself
Seem to be a cumbersome
Our existence is full of
Anguish and pain,deformity and poverty
Nothing is insurmountable
Except that which you no longer try again
No matter how we fail in life
No way a compiled failure could be achieved
Except for tales
We mustn't be besetted in all things
But hunger for peace.


Prince Odimegwu Onwumere

Copyright 2004 Prince Odimegwu Onwumere



NB/These poems were published by www.poetry.com. They have only publishing write, and nothing but that.Should you have any querry do not fail to contact me.Email:globalactingpoets@yahoo.com



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God bless all writers for they are the image of God.

When you insult a writer, you'er not doing the best for him.But when you correct him, you're a good friend.
Cheers !

Odimegwu Onwumere


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The following comments are for "Human Society"
by Princeo

Princeo...
Hi,

Just a question, are you from Ghana or Nigeria? I went to University with a Princess from the Western Kingdom of Nigeria.

I liked the content of your poem, although I would say that it needs some shifting about to make it flow more, jsut a personal thought.

Thanks for sharing.

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: September 23, 2004 )

Prince
I don't really see this as poetry, more like the beginning of a personal essay. This line "Umpteen uncanny is the environment" had me shrugging my shoulders from the start. I didn't understand it. You have some good ideas here but in my opinion they are not expressed well, they're a bit jumbled.

( Posted by: Odysseus [Member] On: September 23, 2004 )





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