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Verse 1

Wishing I could get outta here,
Go anywhere,
Won't you come away somewhere with me?
Just leave?

Anywhere's better than this,
No-one we'll miss.
There's a hundred places we can go,
Places I know.

Chorus

And I wish you could,
Come away with me.
And I think you should,
Come away with me.

And I hope to god,
You'll come away with me.
You're all I ever had so,
Come away with me -
Please.

Verse 2

Hitch a ride on a bus somewhere,
No cares.
Ride a thousand miles somewhere,
Meet you there.

Find a place and stay there,
Somewhere.
We can leave right now,
Somehow.

[ Chorus ]
[ Solo ]


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The following comments are for "Come Away"
by T

It works for me
Nice write, T. I can almost hear the music. The key of D, perhaps?

My Best,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 21, 2004 )





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