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No this is a R-A-N-T! LOL.

I am lucky, that one of the haiku experts Huni was the only one who commented on my 'Last Month' haiku while I too (like windchime) was hoping more people could come and help me improve on it. I could cry too, but nope I didn't. Huni's simple comment assured me that I did just the right thing. There only had been 42 views of the said piece as of the moment, and 35 of them I guess were mine. So far that was my fourth attempt on haiku here (one of them is still in Londongrey's thread).

Oh, maybe people don't want to read anything about last month and care for only the present.

Just to make things clear, this is NOT an invitation for members to read my haiku, just some sort of a journal (liar Pete!).



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crystal face I kiss
tongue tastes like sweet cold rain
I fall into pond




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The following comments are for "My Haiku"
by peterpaulino

Oh shucks
I'll go read it right now!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: September 18, 2004 )

hi peter
I think some of us don't quite get the haiku poems. Of course I can only speak for myself there. So rather than comment I tend to just read the haiku's. I know they are an art form on their own but I always feel like that are a piece of a larger whole. I wish I could comment on everyone's work but time seems to get away. If you have a particular request though, this is a good place to ask others to check it out. I will have a look and a comment but rememeber I don't really know what I'm talking about. ;)mick

( Posted by: smithy [Member] On: September 21, 2004 )

Povero Pietro!!
I understand why you would want to write this. It is disheartening to write and submit something only to find no one has rated or commented on it.
You are not the first to say that others have not read their work.

I think maybe the summer may have had something to do with people not having time to comment...or perhaps they tend to stay away from Haiku's. Ok so no invite to read it? Well that is ok, I will read and comment tomorrow........wink!! I am sure it is good Peter....and YES Huni writes wonderful Haiku's....

Take care
and..............Peter will you ever look back into the camera? LOL

My best to you, Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: September 21, 2004 )

Vipe, Mick, Darlene
My most generous friends! Thank you for taking the time and I'll wait for your comments. Dar, I am looking for a new avatar now, I also wanted to lift my chin up this time.

take care everyone. :D

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: September 21, 2004 )

where is it?
i'm new here - where is this haiku you are talking about?
myron.

( Posted by: myron [Member] On: November 29, 2004 )

Penelope and Myron
Pen, tnx. Keeping my faith always...

Myron, thanks a lot. You'll find the title 'Last Month' just please keep on clicking 'More by Peterpaulino' and you'll find it. I will look forward to your comment ~ welcome to lit.org my friend!

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: November 30, 2004 )





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