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When god clapped Her hands for a season
I came to be
Swimming through the ether

Over the book of forgetfulness
To build a life to remember

That burning question

She wrote with Her finger
On the veins of my heart


The following comments are for "For A Season"
by Revelation

So very nice Revel...
I so love it when the higher power is referred to as she is the reason for all of our beings, and without her gving birth the world would not be possible

( Posted by: cjherlihy [Member] On: October 1, 2004 )

Oh yes
Oh yes, it is abominable that femininity is not synonomous with giver of all life. Of course, it is silly to side God with a sex. But if God did have a sex, I'm sure it should be female.

( Posted by: Revelation [Member] On: October 2, 2004 )

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