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My emotion like thunder,
My wonder,
Exploded!

My feelings, a tapestry
that could not get finished,
could not be framed
nor exhibited.



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crystal face I kiss
tongue tastes like sweet cold rain
I fall into pond




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The following comments are for "Signature"
by peterpaulino

Pen, signature
Thanks. Unfortunately Pen, I was just through using this as my signature, felt sorry to discard it and replace with a new one so I chose to keep it here as a blog. The one you see now as my signature is a new one. I forgot to add there who quoted that line. I will then later. I appreciate that you liked this. ;D

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

Peter
I saw this as your bio, and then as your signature, now you are shelfing it because of a stupid new signature about love not being returned? Bring it back man, to where it should belong. Very good as a poem too.

( Posted by: rainierthisyear [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

Peter
Peter,

Don't agree with your new signature, though it may seem that way at times!

Sorry just my opinion,

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

signature
Peter,

About your new signature. It may not be true, but I think it definately feels that way...

Nae :0(

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

Signature
Rain, you are such a keen observant. Where have you been? Hope you post your poetry too, it will be fun. Thank you.

Ivor, LOL. I agree, but it's just how I feel these days. It will pass I promise. ;D

Renae, it's true in a way. There are those who run after the ones who doesn't stop running away LOL!

Pen, I just thought it sometimes crowd the poetry I post, especially when I do Haiku. I noticed this when I posted my 'Last Month' haiku. I will think about putting it back as a signature. Thanks! :D

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

Beautifully Written
Oh I love this Peter. I am entranced with your signature too. Although it is something you are going through, for now, as you said, it IS what you are feeling. It marks a passage quite nicely. Well put.

Thanks,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

Lucie and Charlene
Lu, very good thought and how true! Thank you.

Char, I hope it won't be too long. Thank you dearie.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

jade
I really enjoyed the way you expressed this.

( Posted by: jade [Member] On: September 19, 2004 )

Jade
Thank you dearie! Now, I think I have to put it back as a signature. :D

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: September 19, 2004 )





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