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Sex and Lucia

Rigid you sit with a fixed stare
My limbs move and tie into knots
You hold the H20 for my survival
It is my only touch of you
The celluloid takes me on a journey
You re-arrange yourself (once) I notice
I recall places and events where time has taken me
As plastic bags play a symphony in your ears
I sit in the moment and relish images
You glare at me when I ask ‘are you awake?’
I settle into the plot, like a corpse absorbing worms.


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by hagerina

Welcome to the site, I noticed this was your first post. Hopefully there will be more from you. This didn't do it for me, but that's just one guy's opinion.

( Posted by: Odysseus [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

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