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Author's Note:
Rhyme unintentional, she made me do it.

The airplane world and mindscape music,
mindscape: the Otherworld, the endless airport
is a fairyland, carefree, cheering, full of hopes.
ď3C,Ē utters my dream incarnate, breathless,

ďMy nameís Catherine, Iím your hostess for the flight.Ē
The voice, the face, the grace , the stareó
itís the unattainable Catherine Deneuve,
ďComment allez-vous, ma cher?Ē
She smiles blanks, I do not care,
I thank fortune; in heaven
soon Iíll be, with you. ďSeven.
Crown Seven.Ē Sheís ready at my call and beckon,
small talk, sheís class act, a perfect hostess,
after all itís business class.

Mindscape: the silver ship runs for the takeoff,
mindscape: the dreamy music, please donít stop,
my Catherine brings libations, her peerless makeup
steals my gaze. Iím a robot- I chew ice, I drink the slop.

I forget to buckle up,
she leans to me Ė itís paradise!!! -
I imbibe her warmth, her breasts, her thighs!
With petals of her fingernails she collects the crinkly cup.

My Catherine serves me!
Offers steak, a sirloin tip, a verdant salad,
with the same heart-stirring grace,
Serenade I write, a ballad,
To the bewitching Gallic face.

I wrote these words of adoration,
I placed it into her tender hands,
then waited, listened to the whine of the jets,
I canít doze off; the 3B talks to me as if weíre friends.
I canít respond, for Iím immersed in admiration
of my Catherine, my airborne Queen of France.

I watch the earth, the outlines of Chesapeake,
thirty minutes till Newark,
at myself I laugh Ė Iím mawkishly romantic, meek,
should in shame I disembark?

She smiled, she fed me, she gave me drink,
but no more for me a slimy leach.
Mindscape music, Anotherworld,
suddenly- I canít believe, I blink-
the fair hand, its skin milk and peach
gives me a note, with a nimble press,
ďI caní t talk. Call me.Ē The hotel, the e-mail, the phone numbers, the address!
and her name for me too keep.

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The following comments are for "First Class, With Catherine Deneuve"
by Teflon

A trip in the sky
Nice fantasies, . Have you ever seen belle de jour? Always had the feeling the stewardesses were hiding something. They are so professional.

( Posted by: DrKilldare [Member] On: September 18, 2004 )

Avec Belle Catherine,
Amour, fantasy, dreams.

I am a dreamer. Loved this read. Uplifting, pun intended. She is a raving beauty, still.
Share more dreams with us.........


( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: September 18, 2004 )

You are suave and debonaire... and you are just as naughty as the rest of us... I knew it...

Lucky man you... I love your subtle way... Looks like she did too...

Yes more... Very Very good...

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: September 18, 2004 )

My Catherine!
I wrote this as a flash fiction, but the Lit org appraisal board deemed it to be poetry.

I guess I was fortunate to have met a very good look-alike.

Love all,


( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: September 18, 2004 )

very stimulating
then in the door came Alice? ah A WONDER for all the fair maidens and dancing fairy tells,a story in its own right how gentle life can be, very much the gentlemen's thing to do,, yes thats why everybody Loves Raymond now,,taking care of Pooh bears........ U still got it I can see,

( Posted by: coco [Member] On: September 20, 2004 )

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