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The stab, the shot, the fist, the stance
The war, the blasts, the manly toys
Tinkle, glitter in a magic dance,
Where the girls meet fighting boys.

Arm the missile, load the round,
Destroy the cities of uncouth,
On my leave a dove I found,
“Ah,” gently sighed the buxom youth.



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The following comments are for "To Love and War!"
by Teflon

Happy B-day Lilia!
I am in Teflon's Bar in writingforums' Lounge. The Search feature should point the way rather quickly.

Here's something for the birthday girl:

Birthday
3/4 oz Chambord raspberry liqueur
1/4 oz Dark Creme de Cacao
1 oz Vodka
1 oz Milk
into a shaker glass with ice add all ingredients shake, pour into a martini glass.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: September 18, 2004 )

Claire has class
Nice to know.. and to keep in mind, to stoke the inspiration and imagination.

But it's impossible to feed everyone's taste. How do they say? Every shell has its gun?

Regards,
Teflon

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: September 18, 2004 )





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