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A CINQUAIN

Cool air,
golden sunlight
slants lower and days are
shorter as Mother Nature brings
Autumn


------
CJ Herlihy


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The following comments are for "Golden Days"
by CJHerlihy

Nice CJ
I enjoyed this one a lot. Liked the way the first and last line reflect each other. I will try that next time myself. well done - huni.

( Posted by: huni [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

Carol
Your golden sunlight shone on my sadness, and I ain't lonely at all. Very good cinquain, lovely.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )





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