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There once was a thing in the sea
Who looked very much like a flea.
It took one look at Jake
It'a belly started to ache
And POP! It turned into a pea.

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~ Blind courage is another way to say stupidity.


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The following comments are for "The Flea-like Thing"
by 00Greenleaf00

What?
This is just horrible. I can't believe I even bothered to comment. Try again.

( Posted by: Staggerlee [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

Huh?
Staggerlee is a harsh one, isn't he?
I don't get this either, but I'll stop short of calling it horrible.

( Posted by: Odysseus [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

Read the Rest!
Jennifer,

I read this and was going to leave without comment. I then went to see your other posts to see where you was coming from... and laughed out loud.

I think you should have posted them all together to give us a feel for the 'nonsense rhyme'. I found them very amusing.

Thank you,

Ivor

( Posted by: ivordavies [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

Jessica: good point
I don't really like the "lyrics" either (hence my rating) but Jessica has a good point about the anger, love, and hate songs. anyway....why do you place these writings under lyrics? aren't they more poems than anything else? do you actually write music to them? i suppose you can find some humor in them but i don't feel like any effort it put into them...honey, hand me the rhyming dictionary.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: October 24, 2004 )

Stinkers

The problem with this is that there are two words lacking this piece of "Garbage". Those words are......."Chuck?....NORRIS!?!?"

( Posted by: CheddyAndNorris [Member] On: October 24, 2004 )

thanks for the comment
That hurt Jason.
Thanks for commenting.

( Posted by: 00Greenleaf00 [Member] On: December 1, 2004 )





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