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Wild flowers peek out
stitches of yellow on green
terrene tapestry

------
Elizabeth Maksymiuk


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The following comments are for "Walk in the Woods"
by emaks

peeking
on a sunny day when the flowers respond to the warmth of nature, it almost appears as if the are opening up to us to show there inner beauty, a nice warm flowing haiku, that displays your inner beauty...Bob:)

( Posted by: poetryman [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

emaks/stitches
I love the image of tapestry. A very good one. I have to look up 'terrene' tho'. lol. love when I learn something new. thanks - huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: September 14, 2004 )

Nice Job
And yes, what a nice picture of flowers, yellow and green, on the earth. A well written haiku, which summons brevity to the max.

Thanks,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 14, 2004 )

Re: Char, Huni, Poetryman
Thankyou for taking the time to read...
Bob, I am blushing.
Huni, sweet praise from one so fine- terrene means 'earhtly', or 'earthy'. Thesaurus is my good friend for Haiku.
and Char, I feel honored-
ty all-
-Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: September 14, 2004 )

Elizabeth, where have you been?? LOL
I read lots on here as they were posting them to be viewed and this of course caught my eye. You did a wonderful job here,,,,
I haven't been on much through the summer but hoping I am ok enough to be here more. I have missed so much.
Glad I spotted this,,,how do you like writing Haikus?

Take care :-)
Dar

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: September 14, 2004 )

Dar, and Walk in the Woods
I have missed alot, myself. You okay to be on? I'll keep you in my daily thoughts, let me know what I can do. Meanwhile, you can only benefit from all the good thoughts I'm sending your way.
I have been busy. Now the kids are back in school.(Yeah!)
(Notice I have a few hours now for me?[and Lit] Love school! LOL)
I hope your feeling well..
If you posted your ills, I must have missed them.
but I have been away from the 'puter.
Your poetry is inspiring and amazing. That you would find some value in my drivle is a very shoulder shrugging event for me. thanks,

I came back to this site after a few months away, and wasn't sure if I'd be welcomed back again. thanks Dareva. You make me feel so...

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: September 14, 2004 )

Dar and writing Hiaku
I find Haiku a piece of cake, (but good haiku...) Usually need to wait a week or two and go back to edit. First is the natural impression; then there's tweaking...
best thoughts to you-

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: September 14, 2004 )

after thought-
I also think the title should be a clue ...
for good haiku...

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: September 14, 2004 )

teflon, chapter 1
Stopped by here and saw your ratings on this. Thank you both. I feel deeply complimented.
-elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: October 24, 2004 )





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