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There once was a lady called Daisy
Who was a little bit crazy
When her boyfriend proposed
She broke his toes
And that's all I know of Daisy.

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~ Blind courage is another way to say stupidity.


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by 00Greenleaf00

MY or HIS
Maybe help the rhyme like this:

"And that's all I know of MY Daisy?"

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: October 20, 2004 )





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