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am i blessed?
or am i cursed?
head confused
enough to burst

magick vision?
or am i blind?
catching up?
or still behind?

i'm wide awake
i need to rest
feeling better?
or still depressed?

i don't swallow
the lies i'm fed
am i alive?
or am i dead?

and if
i ever fell?
am i in heaven?
or is this hell?

------
-RanE-
DEATH IS OUR ONLY SALVATION


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The following comments are for ""saelde""
by viewsocruel

Rane
Fill me in, please, what is Saelde? Its secret meaning made me like your poem more. Keep on posting.

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

Pete,
Saelde is german for "blessed." I'm glad you enjoyed it.

( Posted by: viewsocruel [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

Rane
Yes indeed! And the spelling of magick, how I missed seeing it that way. Good poem, Rane.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

PeTe
thanks! yeah well we can all thank good old aleister crowley for spelling "magick." ^.^

( Posted by: viewsocruel [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )





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