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i can almost see it all
but not quite yet
i cannot remember
i want to forget
the vision before me

i try to adjust mein eyes to see through
but reality is thick

what is waiting to reach me on the other side?
i can only wonder
if i could break all the foundations that hold reality together, i would let it fall apart

i would reconstruct the universe as i see fit.

i would carve the world but reality is far too thick.

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-RanE-
DEATH IS OUR ONLY SALVATION


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