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Volcanic activity reported
Fire has erupted in my soul
Will you quench my flames?
Leave enough desire to cause another explosion

An earthquake has been discovered
Massive amounts of my foundation have been rocked
Once solid and unmovable
Now unsteady and very unpredictable
Causes due to the pleasure built
By involuntary contractions of the most delicious kind

A tornado has been spotted twisting my world
Continuous whirlwinds of passion
At destructively high speeds
Have left my body exhausted and pleading for more

Bring on the storms
I will be your tempest
I can take blizzards, cyclones, and anything else you will
Send my way
I am firmly anchored in the torrents of your love


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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "Whirlwind of Passion"
by nae411

flaming passion
clean up on isle 3, wow...my computer is smoking, very passionate and seductive. Tell the truth, when you write like this, does the air conditioner have to be on...lol, nicely done and very enjoyable ...Bob:)

( Posted by: poetryman [Member] On: September 12, 2004 )

Poetryman :0)
Honestly, it doesn't seem to work quite right lately. It seems to be getting hotter and hotter, strange, huh?

Nae :0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 12, 2004 )

Passion
A nice take on passion, Nae. It's smoking!! And my A C IS on high. LOL.

Thanks,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 12, 2004 )

Wow
Wow, I could feel the passion. Almost as if I was there.

( Posted by: snapshot [Member] On: September 12, 2004 )

Nae
Always, the passionate woman! It was like you poured every ounce of your passion here. Well done, Nae!

( Posted by: peterpaulino [Member] On: September 12, 2004 )

Oooo..
Nae, you go girl... I like... Open up a little more... your good at this... make every body grin from ear to ear...

Your Passion is pleasing... TURN IT UP...

Play it again... is that E9?

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: September 12, 2004 )

My Passion/Daprdan
Thank you guys glad you liked the passion, me too!
Dan I don't know if the one's I have written "turned up" are suitable for here!
E9 ????? What does that mean?

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 12, 2004 )

Juke BoX...
Favorite of mine... from many, many, many, moons ago...

Funny, I always look to see what the song is on E9 at every juke box I pass...

Am I looking for something ??? I think so...

Or is it just memorex??? LOL

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

Volcanoe's
Great read. Emotionally powerful. It has gripping imagery that flows like lava. Unavoidable and unstoppable. I enjoyed this one immensely.

( Posted by: BMartinez [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

Wow Nae
All I can say is whew! got my blood pressure up girl :O)... talk about a tempest of passion! well done!

( Posted by: nauticus66 [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

Hot writers!!! lilia,bill, chris
Thank you Lilia, I love reading you. You certainly do fit in well with this crazy bunch!

Billy coming from you, I am standing taller! You are the king of powerful poetry.

Chris, welcome back!!! Thank you for reading, try a diet low in salt today, hehehe...

It is getting hot around here!!!!!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

(''')QQ(''') Nae!?!?!
WHEW!!!!

And I ALMOST submitted my "Submissions" today.....hmmm, I think I will weight on that one...HEHEHE.

Wow girl this is passionate....boy I love passion, love, the making of it, getting someone to FEEL you say you love them,,,,,

Nae this is a great poem. You just keep on amazing me....never stop!!!

Darlene ;-o

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

warm explosion
NAE!!! I thought you were a nice girl LOL!! There is definately something going on!!

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

Nae is hot
good write. real cool.

( Posted by: DieBaronHobskewward [Member] On: September 14, 2004 )

Dareva/Alex/diebaron
Thank you guys and gal for reading!

Dareva, I am looking forward to your work. Always!

Alex, What made you think that? I never said I was a good girl, did I?


DieBaronHobskewward, Thank you! I like being hot, ahem...

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

Hey Nae
Sweet Nae, long time no speak. I liked this very much, the whole concept and all. But you know what, I'd change.......

Nevermind, it's good the way it is.

Your partner

( Posted by: Odysseus [Member] On: September 16, 2004 )

Jessica/Odysseus
Jessica, Thank you. I try not to cross the line, I seem to be tippy toeing on it lately though! My next one "Anticipation" well I think that one is really walking the tight rope. Yikes!

Mark, You funny man. I know you want to add/change or delete. You can't help it! Thank you.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 20, 2004 )

Nae, email it to all of us
LOL.......if it doens't get validated for here tonight,,well then email it!!!

Thanks for your comment on mine from yesterday,, YES that IS my kind of poetry, have lots of that around.......over 50 pieces...very similar.

This was hot stuff Nae...Passion is a drive, and seems to be less of it around than there is of fighting, maiming and killing.

I really like this!!

Dar

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: September 20, 2004 )

Yes...
Email it to us... (if they deem it too risque)...

We really need another side to this site... for that sorta thing...

Wonder what the restrictions (if any) would be there ??? Hard to Imagine... LOL

( Posted by: daprdan [Member] On: September 20, 2004 )

Email addresses needed
If it doesn't get validated, I will need some email addresses. If you are truly interested email me at nae411@yahoo.com.

Thanks for reading!
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 20, 2004 )

Daprdan/Dareva/email?
No validation on "Anticipation" if you want it email me at the above address and I will send it your way.

Dareva, I sent you "Confessions" I won't try to get that one validated, yikes!

Lilia, I sent it to you, thanks!

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 21, 2004 )





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