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Every petal is a word
A petal falls
Every bud is a aspect ignored
A bud blossoms
Every thorn is a fight
A thorn perturbs

A petal falls
A bud blossoms
A thorn perturbs

The seasons have passed
Where have the roots gone

Louie B. Tunnell

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The following comments are for "Rose"
by LouieLou

I really like the way you have put this together. Interesting structure always gets my attention. Hope you have some other work here to see. regards huni.

( Posted by: huni [Member] On: September 11, 2004 )

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