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The World

Listen close and take thy hand,
As I show you the wonders of this land.
The dwarves and the goblins, and even the elves.
This land is far greater than anything else.
You will see the forest of talking trees,
And witness the mystery of foreign machines.
And beyond the lake, of pirates and trade,
Is the city that holds a great parade.
And here is the wall, that keeps the bad out,
For two thousand years it has stood about.
And next I shall show you the splendor of home,
And how great is to be back in your own.



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