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Love Story

A one sided tale,
Of permanent loss,
How well 'we' knew each other,
How much 'we' loved,
Did you die, my love,
The day you didn't call?
The day you vanished.
My love will never leave,
But will you ever return?
That place we sat,
That trail we walked,
I hope to see you there,
But never once,
In all these years,
Did you darken my door.
So I look for you,
In every man I meet,
A permanent rebound,
From a love less sweet.


Me!? Weird!? Never!!

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The following comments are for "Love Story"
by Abbie

Very cute

( Posted by: Kine [Member] On: April 18, 2002 )

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