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As a kid, we loved to visit my favorite Uncle Bill at his mansion. It had hundreds of rooms and ceilings that went forever. Uncle Bill staffed the mansion with many servants. They would greet us, often giving us a piece of candy before leading us to the grand room where we would find Uncle Bill waiting for us.

It was only later, when we were much older that we found out Uncle Bill had been in prison.

It wasn't my fault...I fell asleep and missed my stop.

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The following comments are for "Memorable Moments: Uncle Bill"
by Jeff

Well they say to be careful who you take candy from :-)

( Posted by: kat [Member] On: April 14, 2002 )

reminds me
This kinda reminds me about the cookies from Roganize.tehe anyone who would like to figure out what i am talking about go to forum introduce yourself-not another one.this conversation always makes me chuckle.
-P.B. Hedwig

( Posted by: P.B. Hedwig [Member] On: April 17, 2002 )

Funny - good twist
Liked the last line. Will remember it everytime I eat a twizzler

( Posted by: CaptainKeyboard [Member] On: March 4, 2004 )

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