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I feel your fear
I feel itís so near
I stay so close
I am the host
I know as you kneel
I know how it feels
I need no compassion
I react to the reaction
I love your hatred
I feel sated
I soak in your tears
I bathe in your fears
I laugh as you attempt
I breathe in your regret
I hold the key
I know what you need
I feed on you
I cannot lose
I will never let you go
I am your shadow.




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by Gordon

Shadow
Can,t wait to see it
G

( Posted by: Gordon [Member] On: September 9, 2004 )





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