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it's been a long time since i have submitted a poem. it's short and bitter (has language). anywho, here's to old times...


You need to get over yourself
You need to get a fucking clue
Realize other people matter here and now
But all you can think about is you
I can't make you change
You will never act differently
So while you go and fuck your mirror
Realize you've forgotten about me


Dedicated to Ryan

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