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At best you’d think
I would be able to convince
Her that big is beautiful.
It doesn’t seem
To matter: whatever
I say about the topic
Is wrong. Meaty hips
Grab back. Thick fingers
Make it harder
To link, makes it
Harder to let go. I know
Too many people without
Angular features to think
It could ever matter
If you had a double
Chin. What’s better
Than sweet round
Rosy cheeks gleaming
Around a smile
From your beaming
Face; all for me. Hold
Onto your baby
Fat, what else do you
Have left? Truth is you’d think
I would be able to convince
Her that big is beautiful.
The biggest part
Of me skips
A beat when you
Whisper hello.


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to that cool mountain air on an appalachian trail, oooooh life is better there - yonder mountain string band


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The following comments are for "big is beautiful"
by dmbrrphish7

weighing in
a good "woman" could never be as big as her heart, this is a very nice way of saying I love you despite how you feel about yourself, nicely done...Bob:)

( Posted by: poetryman [Member] On: September 12, 2004 )

craziness...
just a weird thought or question. if the writer is working so hard to convince her big is beautiful, is it selfish to assume he is the big one??

( Posted by: dmbrrphish7 [Member] On: September 13, 2004 )

Big is Beautiful
As a poem this is very sweet, your words flow nicely. But I would give up on trying to convince someone with words, show her with actions. Good job!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 14, 2004 )





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