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A/N- This is the first good peice of poetry I've produced. I'm even using it for prize speaking in my school. Hope you like it!


No One
By: Brightdark1

I think about my life
And the pains I have endured
Then I think of the happy times,
the times with my friends.
But no one really knows me,
Or what I think of you.
Many donít understand me,
Including my own family.
When people make me mad
All I think of is you
And how you betrayed me
And left me in this world.
I love you when you comfort me
I hate you when you make me cry.
No one understands me
Or what I think.
Not even you,
Not even I.



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by brightdark1

depressing,
good, my sympathies

( Posted by: Furius [Member] On: April 9, 2002 )





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