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This song
Makes me go blissfully crazy
This smell of smoke
Comforts me
The thought of touch
Relaxes me
And the memory of you
Agitates me

Gazing in your eyes
Makes me giddy
Tasting you
Replenishes me
Kissing you
Excites me
And drinking you in
Nourishes me

Feeling your power
Energizes me
Dancing in your light
Refreshes me
Sitting in your energy
Comforts me
And knowing you’re always there
Reassures me

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The following comments are for "All Things Black and Beautiful"
by Kambriel

All things
This is good. The rhythem, I thought, was a little off, but it says what it wants to without getting boring. Good work!

( Posted by: xitwound117 [Member] On: September 4, 2004 )

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