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They tell me "Too much do you think
Of drug-induced rock and roll kink"
But in spite of my quirks
I emerge with a smirk
Cuz they're right and it tickles me pink.

Beware the lollipop of mediocrity-
Lick it once and you suck forever.

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The following comments are for "self portrait"
by metrozol

self portrait
This tickles me pink too. Good job.


( Posted by: Char [Member] On: September 6, 2004 )

Metrozole, WELCOME!!
This is a fun piece of the way what do they call this? Limericks? I think. Any way I am agreeing with the two lovely ladies above me, it is a jovial piece. I cant' wait to read more of you,,,
and by the way welcome to Lit.


( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: September 22, 2004 )

Thank you all for such a positive welcome to this site,and for your patience as I slowly learn more
about it.I certainly hope I can continue to enter-
tain you,raise your eyebrows or at least make you go "Hmmm..." It's been a couple of wonderful weeks
so far - it's all your fault.I love it here!

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: September 28, 2004 )

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