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august like april
kite tail smile spins taut fresh pull
silver queen corn sun

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I blog irregularly at TinkerX. I'm also on Twitter. @andyhavens, go figure.



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The following comments are for "Cool summer"
by andyhavens

Pale sun
This is amazingly complex and deceptively simple. Love the description of the pale sun. huni.

( Posted by: huni [Member] On: September 3, 2004 )

Cool Summer
I enjoyed this. Wher have you been?

( Posted by: arc [Member] On: September 4, 2004 )

oops
WHERE...

( Posted by: arc [Member] On: September 4, 2004 )





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