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We could love like the sky.
So pure and whole,
gloriously unknown.

When its dark
I wont see you,
You wont hear me
Together weíre apart.

Iíll search for you,
Through the rumors and lies.
Throughout my life,
Iíll bleed for you alone.

your tears may fall.
Creating the stars I follow,
Your face may be the moon,
I may never reach you love.

you could be the sun,
The clouds,
The vastness of this place.

If you are the rain,
Iíll catch every drop that falls,
and carry you with me until
the sun takes you again.

But if your not the sun,
or the moon,
Even the sky.
I may have lost you forever.



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The following comments are for "searching for the sky"
by DEMONeyesBLUE

check it yo
hey people check it out, tell me what you think

( Posted by: DEMONeyesBLUE [Member] On: September 2, 2004 )

no change
tom, good to see that you have the same inspiration...yeah..im still reading your stuff! bet ya thought i forgot!

( Posted by: reign [Member] On: November 19, 2004 )





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