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Bring me blood
Bring me bone
So I may bathe in violence
So I may craft my glory

Give me sunlight
So I may create their darkness
Give me pride
So I may shame them all

Hope, my weapon
With it I make destruction complete
With it I demoralize
Total despair

I created rightiousness
To pave the way for sin
There is no dishonor
Without honor reigning first

Here, have your life
Have your happiness
Suffering all the sweeter
When I take it all away

What a glorious world for I
What delightful pain I make
Only I can see
That it is good

Stay metal!

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