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The focus of my attention
That which draws my sight
Staring back peacefully

Anticipating my thoughts
Waiting for my action
Searching for any attempt
At words with an intention

Taunting me with white
Laughing in my face
Repressing my ideas
Locking up my mind just in case

Preventing my creation
Of things I want created
Inhibiting any progress
'Til all energy, depleted

Curse the white I stare at
Curse the blankess that stares back
But most of all, I think
Curse the talents that I lack

Stay metal!

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