Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

No more immortals
No legacy to tell
About this land
Abandoned by the soldiers

No more songs rising
Above the fallen stone
No more hope
To bring the heroes home

No more kings of men
All taken with the force
Of marching soldiers gone
No sons to carry on

No life to keep alive
Nothing shifts the dirt
Not a single thing remains
Look at what I have done

The unhindered wind
Breaking the calm, whispers to me,
The lord of this war-torn land,
"We have no masters here"

------
Stay metal!
-xit


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Anti-Throne"
by xitwound117

Anti-Throne
Hey,

Your probably going to think I am really thick, but what is this poem about? I really want to know.

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: September 2, 2004 )

londongrey
Nah, you're not thick. I have to explain most of my poems anyhow, I think its a flaw in my writing. This really isn't about anything specific, its just about a man who has conquered everything, but has, in reality, won nothing.

( Posted by: xitwound117 [Member] On: September 2, 2004 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: