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If i could understand
My mind
If we could
Walk hand in hand
If anyone anywhere
Knows the square
If life was longer
Would we linger
If there was no hunger
Would there be a number
If we knew
What would we do?
If anyone has the answer
Keep it to yourself
IF
The poets gift.



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The following comments are for "IF1"
by Gordon

IF1
Thanks Tinalouise
Glad your inspiration was tickled
G

( Posted by: gordon [Member] On: August 31, 2004 )

If 1, Gordon
I enjoyed reading your poems. I really like the way you write.....keeping my eyes open for more!!

Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: September 9, 2004 )

IF1
Thanks Darlene glad you enjoyed them
Claire my first love is the writung forums "Poetry"
Thanks for the comments
G

( Posted by: Gordon [Member] On: September 9, 2004 )





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