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Last night I got an invitation
To High Tea with the Queen.
The table was set in splendor
such as I've never seen.

"Have a couple of biscuits."
"Lemon, honey, or milk in your tea?"
All of a sudden I was somewhere else.
What was happening to me?

I had been transported into a helicopter
beside Magnum and T. C.
I was in awe as I looked down
At the crystal sea.

At that time I was taken again
remembering all I saw.
Right in front of me stood Lassie
and she offered me her paw.

I threw a frisbie to her
and as we ran through the woods.
I was lifted up and transported again
unable to stop it if I could.

I appeared in front of a mansion
feeling kind of silly.
I knocked on the door...as it opened
there stood the Beverly Hillbilies.

My mouth flew open...before me stood
Granny, Ellie, Jethro, and the one they called Jed.
I laughed as critters ran passed me
and a monkey stood on her head.

Oh boy, here I go again.
Wonder where I'll land instead?
Ah....my head is on my pillow.
I'm back in my very own bed.






------
Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "Sleep Travel"
by Nitz Kitty

Hillbillies
I did it again...misspelled a word...well I guess I just have to show that I'm not perfect

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 30, 2004 )

Spelling
No problem Miss Kitty we all do it at times. That said loved it.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: August 31, 2004 )

Chapter 1
Thanks for your rating and comment....I have such weird dreams...never know where I'll be headed...sometimes I remember them but for the most part I forget...Maybe that's a good thing...hehe

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 31, 2004 )

different
I enjoyed reading this, especially being a tv buff. So good I didn't even notice any spelling errors :-)

( Posted by: DreamStar224 [Member] On: August 31, 2004 )

Dream Star 224
I really appreciate your comment...I like all the older tv shows myself...the ones that were on many years ago...that and my weird dreams prompted me to write this poem...I'm glad you liked it...Thanks for reading...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: August 31, 2004 )

Nitz Nitz Nitz...
This made me laugh....you know, this avatar has to go, and be replaced with something that fits you to a tea........(LOL), joking honey, this was funny, like you said, you love to laugh...nice to share...thanks.

Darlene

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: August 31, 2004 )

Dareva
Thanks for the comment and rating...and if I can make one person smile or laugh , I have made my goal....
Notice the avatar...that sly smirk and the up lifted left eyebrow....She's not the sweet little Barbie Doll you think she is...this picture from my past promped me to write a short story called The Queen of the Prom...about a nobody from school who goes to college... meets, falls in love with, and marries the famous football player from her old high school...thinking now she will be accepted by all his friends...decides to go to the class reunion...but the very same three girls that made her life a living Hell in high school were there to humiliate her...that's when she snapped....when she got home she planned all three of their deaths...each in a delicious different way....Then when all that was done...she came home ...climbed the stairs to the attic...put on her old prom dress and as she looked into the mirror...placed a tiaira on her head and said...."Now I AM the Queen of the Prom." Sick...huh.... Hey...that's what I think I'll be at the ball....

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: September 1, 2004 )

Nitzkitty
Sorry I am late on this. But this is very beautiful! I fully enjoyed the story you've woven here. I find it difficult to write a poem about any of my dreams. This one is creative and I think this should inspire me to go on writing a dream poem.

I also am fond of stories about teleportation, well this one has similarity to it. Beautiful!

Thank you for this one.

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: September 1, 2004 )

Opps
The word is prompted...and now Mr. DeMille,
"I'm ready for my closeup."

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: September 1, 2004 )

Peter
Thanks for your comment...I have also written a poem about an out of body excperience I had as a child...it confused me until I read up on the subject years later...then I knew what happened to me...I think ...I'll find it and submit it today...

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: September 1, 2004 )

I think I need another cup of coffee
or maybe I had too much....My fingers want to spell wrong today...experience...is the word....I hope

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: September 1, 2004 )

Kitty; Hillbilly, or not
This is too cute; I loved it, and You just started my day off with an enormous chuckle...This is a great dream poem...

Thanks for a great read...

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: September 1, 2004 )

Jeannie
I always value your opinions and ratings of my poetry...Thanks and God bless

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: September 1, 2004 )

Lucie
Thanks for your comment and rating...My head has always been full of fantasies..glad you liked it...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: September 1, 2004 )





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