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Eclipse of the Day

This was in my land
Like the camelion feaces!
So Ihebuzoaju memorised With
pinch of snuff he continued;
That time when we check time
By falling and rising ofthe sun
When days were counted after
Market days-Fell the night
At broad day;Cocks were
Cooing and sheep were bleating,
Men were shuddering.
Things like this donnot just
Happen!The gods said.
Men adjusted their immoralities.
He gnashed teeth; white
Man coming made you abberants!
He echoed while we stared.

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