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"DREAMING IN COLORS"
I dream in colors
Red and blue
Purple violence
Yellowish hues
Blossoming bossoms
Roses in white
Cloudy skies
Bring stormy nights
I swim with dolphins
Dancing at the waters edge
Racing eagles
Flying kites
Rainbow gold
Glittering bright
In the sunlight
Skin turns bronze
Sweat trickles
Goose tickles
Running with the wind
Chasing wandering clouds
Dreaming in colors
Dreaming out loud

-by Joseph D. Greenwood



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The following comments are for "Dreaming In Colors"
by msun269

yes indeed
i can't explain it, but i keep coming back to this poem. it's quick and flowing meter make me want to read it again and again. nice work.

( Posted by: nightshade [Member] On: May 22, 2002 )

smooth flowing
A very nice poem. I definitely echo what has already been said.
I thought that in the part in the middle (with the dolphins and eagles), the flow was broken a little bit - it didn't quite fit - but overall it's a delightful poem.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: January 26, 2003 )





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