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My heart!
longing for thee -
awake with ache of love
Thee be gone! I ... Ah! dreamt I was
The Bard.

Not the poem which we have read, but that to which we return, with the greatest pleasure, possesses the power and claims the name of essential poetry.

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The following comments are for "My Heart! (cinquain)"
by Huni

I like this cinquain, and now it's what is hip? I like your different voice here... not sweet but full of passion and longing, and young in its own time. Very lovely, Huni!

( Posted by: PETERPAULINO [Member] On: August 30, 2004 )

Really enjoyed this piece.

( Posted by: ograd77 [Member] On: August 30, 2004 )

Peter, tina, ograd
Thanks for the comments on this one.
Tina, me too, on the watching people grow on here idea. To have the time would be great. To do it would be better. Some poets here are shinning examples of stretching and growing and they inspire me. warmest huni.

( Posted by: Huni [Member] On: November 30, 2004 )

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