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Dark and Gray

As I look out my window
stare into the dark gray sky
I wonder what your doing
tears fall from my eyes

As I look deep in my self
of this dark soul
I wonder if I'm worth it
as my lies all unfold

I'm sorry for all I've done
there's nothing I can do
as I dwell on my mistakes
I'm sorry for hurting you

as I look out my window
I stare into my past
astounded by my sins
my life drained so fast

I'm lost with out u baby
I can't life my life
only God knows
I'm giving up this fight

my feet are on the ledge now
the rush going to my head
my hearts' beating through
my broken bleeding chest

My sweaty palms are grasping
the cold wet rail
No ones stopping me this time
I'm going without fail

My fingers are letting go
I feel them one by one
one more movement, one more second
my wanted death will come

as I looked out my window
staring at the dark gray sky
I never felt more peaceful
as I Jumped to my good bye




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*D^A^N^I^E^L^L^E*



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