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quiet with dreams
wearing the soft mouth of sleep
beloved







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MKL

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"I place these moments in my pocket
to be pulled
at the rush of noon,
the crush of three...
when tears come,
when words must learn to be enough..." MKL


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The following comments are for "Beloved"
by Serenem

Hemingway Utterly Poetic
That's how I see haiku now, looking at this Beloved.

I might be joining the ranks of haiku/neohaiku writers. I've been Penelope's student on the writingforums. Feels like I'm getting the feel for the threads of thought.

( Posted by: teflon [Member] On: September 7, 2004 )

Tef and 'ku
Thanks, Tef, for reading this and commenting! I'm so thrilled that you are seriously getting interested in writing haiku! It is such a wonderful, thought provoking form.

My warmest regards,

Melinda

( Posted by: Serenem [Member] On: September 8, 2004 )





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