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Small bird on the ground


I pick you up in my hands


May you fly again





Author's Note:
A sad but warm haiku in memory of the children who died without a loving family


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Playing is the most important thing life...


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The following comments are for "Small bird"
by ursus

Nice haiku
Im not an avid reader of haikus, but have come across several good ones on this site, including this one. Short and beautiful.

( Posted by: Ingi [Member] On: August 27, 2004 )





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